Round One


Maybe I’m alone in this, but editing my stuff isn’t as fun as writing my stuff. I’m halfway through my first round of edits—just a basic run through to clean up some passive voice and typos, and gearing up for round two—a good protagonist dialogue edit. I think I can do a round of edits every week. And P.S. I’m calling my story “Blind” for now, but we’ll see how it goes.

I’ve drafted a query letter for A Scribble in the Margins and I’m planning to send it out this weekend. I’ve submitted queries for A Scribble before, but no bites yet. I did a major rework of the query and I’m hoping it will do the trick. Keep your fingers crossed for me, say a prayer, or send positive energy into the Universe—whichever you believe. Or all three. See if I care.

I finished The Lost World a couple of weeks ago and started on The Tragedy of Arthur, which was recommended to me by a friend. I love reading. I wish I had more time for it, but I truly love it. I’m fascinated by the way other people think—by the way they choose describe things and by the stories they’re driven to tell. It’s especially evident to me in poetry. Sometimes I wish I were Billy Collins’ brain. And Angelina Jolie’s body. But that’s another blog….

Well it’s way past my bed time but I didn’t want to let another day go by without blogging. Sleep sweet everyone.

Blog off.

When it rains, it pours (into my basement)


 I haven’t blogged for a bit and here is why:
            Excuse #1: My basement flooded
            Excuse #2: My washing machine stopped working
            Excuse #3: Really? Aren’t #1 and #2 enough?

I won’t go through the whole circus that has been my week, but suffice it to say that not only has my writing been neglected, but my gym time too. I will mention that Monday night there was a horrible LostOnCampus experience at the U of U that made me want to pull my hair out. Famine—I can take it. Battling hungry lions to the death—no problem. Navigating the U of U campus with a crappy photocopied map and a severely uninformative Information Desk employee—maddening. It took me days and half a bottle of Merlot to recover emotionally.

The good news is I visited Hastings yesterday, bathed in some books and magazines and came home invigorated. I wrote the ending to my story and I love it. I’m still a few (thousand) words short of my goal but that will right itself in edits.

I still marvel how much I love this story. I compare A Scribble in the Margins to a gradual romance. We met. We liked each other. We grew quite fond of each other—even enjoyed each other’s company often. We fell in love. But this new story is different. It has been a whirlwind romance. A LoveAtFirstSight relationship. I’m still so fascinated with some of my characters that I think about them while I’m trying to fall asleep. Weird? Yes.

So I am back on track. I have some new ideas to help me as I move into the editing phase. I’m excited to see how the story morphs and matures as I go through it.

Recently I read Room by Emma Donoghue and loved it. I could rant about that for several paragraphs, I'm afraid, but I'll tell you that I couldn't put it down and leave it there. I’m reading The Lost World by Michael Crichton and enjoying that as well. What have you been reading lately? Favorites? Unfavorites? Eh?

Blog off!